2002/07/22 11:57 Southern Weekend
Wen: Wang Hill
I am a poet Yang, I have written the famous sentences of the ages: "Face towards the snow mountain, winter warm summer cool, starting to be a happy person from tomorrow." But every day I have been today, so I have been not happy. "
In the snowy mountain, I met Hong Qi. He held his dog stick and has been boasting his martial arts. I really want to laugh, because the rivers and lakes have been eaten, there is a greedy thing, swaying the palace in an angry, and is called Hong Qifong. Because it is troubles, it is also very like a Japanese, so everyone will save a word, and call him Hong Qi.
I have forgotten why myself came to the snow, perhaps in Taohua Island to provoke the teacher Ju Fu, maybe it is bullying the big and small martial arts, maybe it is anger the crowd nose of all true education, maybe a aunt doesn't like me. In short, in the snow mountain, I know Hongqi - ADE, the peach blossoms on the island; ADE, the bees of the ancient tomb.
Hong Qi fed a lot of 蜈 蜈 给 吃, I have to eat, because I am hungry, but he.
I ate the cockroaches, Hong Qi hard, it is hard, becomes a body. Snow Mountain has an oxygen, I only remember, Hong Qi let me keep his body for three days. If you are doing for three days, I will also become a corpse, so I decided to do something.
I took off my gloves and started to massage flood.
When the future generation records this history, in order to facilitate flow, it is written like a child.
You shoot one, I shoot one, the snow mountain is saving the flood seven; you shoot two, I shoot two, Hong Qi hard like a knee; you shoot three, I shoot three, the residual saving people is not simple; you shoot four, I shoot Fourth, Yang Yonghong is red and red; you shoot five, I shoot five, press the head according to the butt; you shoot six, I took six, I saw the test questions; you shoot seven, I shoot seven, high school entrance examination You shoot eight, I shoot eight, snow mountain massage top scratch; you shoot nine, I shoot nine, so save people ancient times; you take ten, I took ten, the funny game is over Zhou Xingchi.
In short, according to the regulations of the teacher, I actually massage Hong Qiji --- Mountaineering Home Xie smoke told me that the off glove is equal to suicide, but he is wrong, according to the materials given by the teacher, my The finger is intact - he woken up and broke out: "What do you press? The bones are all broken by you, don't move, 5555, Rong children promised to make me eat her sneaked tofu and can't eat. "
When I was in Hong Qi, I was coming out from the back of the mountains, and I played with Hongzu.
When I was young, my grandmother asked: "Do you have a good?" I said: "Hey." Grandma asked: "Grandma is good?" I said: "Grandma is good."
Grandma said: "Child, you are not your kind, grandmother is not your grace." After saying it, I sang a "big disaster from the sky", I am most afraid of sings, especially She still sat and didn't listen. I like it is to play the tiger with a cloth.
I have been killed by Guo Jing Huang Rong, I am very dead, and I am afraid for many years. This is a foreigner, called Ouyang Feng. Hong Qi did not dare to move with me, so that I learned a trick, and I was hit. Specifically, "God Carving Heroes" published by Jin Yongchen. "God carving heroes" is compiled, but about Hong Qi and Ouyang Feng use me to compete, only the results are wrong. The novel said that I was dead and Hong Qi died, and only Hong Qiyi was only killed. The truth is that Hong Si's bones are broken by me, but I can't play, I will die. I am helping each other with me.
As far as I know, things are like this, I massage it, I have another down. I don't like Hong Qi, who will like a person who makes you eat?
So, I have no choice, even if the teacher is forcing that I will live in Hong Qi, I will not go down the mountain. (The exception is self "I have to say the story and the little dragon girl. Chapter 3. Snow Mountain Flying Fox", Yang Tied, Wang Hansheng
Ma original: Now Jin Yong is coming. Or Jin Yong's figure is coming. It is a self-commentation called Yang, and the tone is like "Westward Journey" in China, the text is like Joseph, the "God knows".
Wang Hill, admire! admire! (Do a boxing)
It is seen as a text, no matter if this is what I will be unsatisfactory. Although the saving motives in the text also have questions, but in the hidden mysterious machine, the original simple Jin Yong story suddenly enriched. It should be said that five words in the parentheses: Wang Hanshan organizes - is the most most exciting pen!
I have to say, there is a classic dialogue in "Red Light", with "智 取 山" singing section; naturally there is a children's songs like God ... You shoot two, I shoot two, Hong Qi hard like knees ... ... It is said that the composition can not be given. 99 points, equivalent to 59.4 points, wroned you Wang Hill.
Han Jun: I judge this article to 49, among which is 44 points, the development level is 5 points.
I have been extremely contradictory, 踌躇, repeatedly, and wear this score after weighing. Take 3 minutes 40 seconds. This is a composition that makes people "deflection". There are two scores in my heart, but they don't dare to play.
The first, 56 points (base level 46 points, development grade 10 points). I appreciate this article, or say, this article is quite brought about my taste. Constitution, novel angle, Wen Si is flying, and it is unexpected. But this high score is too eye-catching, re-exam, and it is considered "too igniter" and "distinguished". That, maybe it is degraded to 36.
Second, 39 points (no level of development). It is the "cautious and parents" "cautious", "the current secondary school language world is widely popular, the default" potential standard "to score, this" potential standard "is: examination of composition, not ridicule, play, must be serious, serious; Especially for the pleasant, the people's minds, the people's mind, and serious things, thousands of ridicules, and they can not. This article has made a big taboo. Secondly, this civil will not "see the wind, the rudder, the injective writing". "The Choice of the Mind" The proposition person clearly made you choose "Savior to save people" "I will be him for him." And this article is against! I have also overestimated 39 points.
