1. The Artist's Work Pushes Our Civilization to a higher level. Improved: Artists' Work Upgrades Our Civilization.
2. For Example, You Work in A Big Factory. Improved: Suppose You Work In A Big Factory.
3. You'll Find You Are Fit for Business and You Can Make It Your Main Job. Improvement: You'll Find That You Are Cut Out for Business And You Can Make It Your Career.
4. We will Own Nothing at alliff o depend on luck. Improvement: We will get Nowhere if We Rely on Luck.
5. He Will Get a higher Salary to Improve His Living Level. Improved: He Will Get a higher Salry, Thus Improving His Life.
6. THEIR BRAIN Is Still Veryng. Improvement: They Are Still Immature.
7. Dissatisfaction Makes People Things. Improvement: Dissatisfaction Impels People for the Better.
8. They can't analyze Clearly What is right and what is awful. Improved: They Cannot Tell Right from WRONG.
9. IT Will Help Children to Form A Good Habit of DEALING WITH TIME. Improvement: IT Will Help Children Learn To Make Good Use of Time.
10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. Improved: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He CAN make Ends meet with it.
11. Since People Are ALWAYS NOT SATISFIED WITHER Development. Improved: Since People Are NEVER Satisfied with Their Status Quo, They Want Further Developments.
12. The only thing thing ued to do is to find a job which can basily get big mother. Improved: The only thing they ued to do is to find a job..
13. They Like An Active Life But Not A Peaceful Life. Improved: They Like An Active Life Rather Than a Peaceful One.
14. Some Cigarettes May Even Cost A Larger Sum of Money. Improvement: Some Cigarettes May Cost Even More.
. 15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products improvements: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.16 In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills improvement:.. In order to meet The Needs of Future Work, Students Must Learn Some Practical Skills.
17. IT is Very Necessary More Qualified Scientists and Technicians. Improved: Qualified Scientists and Technicians Are in Great Demand.
18. This Knowledge Will Become a Part of Your Body. Improved: This Knowledge Will Become Part of You.
19. They cannot think clearly. Improved: They Cannot Think Straight.
20. Money CAN Improve Their Living Standard. Improved: Money CAN IMPROVE Their Life.
21. PARENTS Always Think That Children Will Get A Good Job and Earn a Lot of Money. Improved: PARENTS Always Expect Their Children TO Get A Good Job and Earn a Lot of Money.
22. IF A Student Only Cares About Money, Will Lead To Be Unhappy All His Life. Improved: IF A Student Only Cares About Money, He Will Be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
23. ONE PURPOSE OF Education Is To Study The Way In Which He Studies Later. Improved: One Purpose of Education Is To Learn To Learn.
24. Many Parents Arrange Their Children Go To Learn Piano. Improved: Many Preents Send Their Children to Piano Classes.
25. When I Want To Absorb Somebody Else'S Opinion, I Will Study with Others. Improved: When I Need Second Opinion, I Will Study with Others.
26. Eating Outside Has The MOST Advantage That We can go at Any Time WHEN WHEN WAFING. Improved: The Best Part of Eating Out Is That We can Leave Everything Behind After MEAL.
27. SMOKING CAN HELP You Relax Your Mind. Improved: Cigarettes Can Help You Relax.
28. What's About Nonsmokers? Improvement: What about nonsmokers? 29. Why not to be a non-smoker? Improvement: Why not be a non-smoker?
30. Everyone Will Have Many Friends in His Life. Improved: Everyone Has Friends in His Life.
31. I am Not Good at Maths, But English Improved: I am Good Not At Mathematics But at English / My Stregth IS Not Mathematics But English.
32. WHO is The PROPER PERSON TO MAKE UP HIS MINDS About Children's Leisure Time? Improved: Who is The PROPER PERSON TO PLAN CHILDREN's Leisure Time?
33.it Is Children Who Clear About Their Interests. Improvement: IT IS Children Who Are Clear About Their Own Interests.
34. I Agree The Latter IDEA. Improvement: I agree with the latter idea.
35. Many People Dissatisfy with The Status Quo. Improvement: Many People Are Dissatisfied with The Status Quo.
36. SO i feel Breathe More Comfortably now. Improved: SO I feel More Comfortable Now When I Breathe.
37. People Should Learn Knowledge No Matter How old They is. Improved: People Should Learn No Matter How old They area / people...
38. No One Knows All The Things. Improved: No One Knows Everything.
39. I Want To Live In a Quiet Place To Admi Peaceful Life. Improved: I Want To Live In A Quiet Place To Enjoy Peaceful Life.
40. Each Form of Having Friends Has ITS Advantages Improved: Each Way of Choosing Friends Has ITS Advantages.
41. I Was Admitted to a Key University for Which Few Dared To Sign Up. Improved: I Was Admitted to a Key University To Which Few Dared to Apply
42. Luckily, He Recognized An American Professor. Improved: Luckily, He Knew An American Professor.
43. They Will Learn The Bad Habits. Improved: They Will Develop Bad Habits.
44. In this Continued Process, People Make Progress. Improvement: in this cycle, people make propress.
. 45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary improvements:. Lastly, higher education means higher salary.46 By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency improvements:. By making friends who are different from ourselves , We can make up for ou whortcomings.
47. A WRONG DECISION WILL BRING EVEN WORSE FACT. Improvement: a Wrong Decision Will Bring Even Worse Result.
48. You Spend All your life. Improved: You Devote All your life to the fulfillment of your Dream.
49. Children Should Be Taught Disciplines in Order To Avoid Unnecessary Lost. Improved: Children Should Be Taught Discipline in Order To Avoid Unnecessary Loss.
50. I felt alone. Improved: I felt lonely.
